Writing challenge

One day there was a girl skiing with her dad, brother and her mum meanwhile a big avalanche was coming down the huge Mountain the where on. They didn’t realise until it was in front of their eyes. they got swept by the huge gust of snow as, they lay still is the freezing snow. Then they all start to get up they are all shivering, under the circumstances they were swept by the massive avalanche. As, they where all up the dad spotted a house about 400 meters away they set off to go to the house.While they were walking it was getting colder and colder as they got even closer, they saw a person in the house. When they got there he came straight to the door and he welcomed them into he house with nice warmth. as a result of them tell the guy about the avalanche. they got to stay at the house for a bit and settled in very well.

 

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